Mastering the Extended Response Essay (45-Minute Strategy)
The Extended Response is a 45-minute essay task requiring you to analyze two paired passages with opposing arguments.
The 3 Scoring Traits (0–2 points each = 6 points total)
- Trait 1: Creation of Arguments & Use of Evidence (Did you analyze which author is better supported using specific evidence from both passages?)
- Trait 2: Development of Ideas & Organizational Structure (Clear thesis, organized paragraphs, logical transitions.)
- Trait 3: Clarity & Command of Standard English Conventions (Sentence variety, correct grammar, punctuation.)
Proven 4-Paragraph Essay Template
- Paragraph 1 (Introduction): State the topic, summarize both viewpoints, and state your thesis clearly identifying which passage is better supported with empirical evidence.
- Paragraph 2 (Analyze the Stronger Passage): Discuss specific facts, statistics, and expert studies the author uses.
- Paragraph 3 (Analyze the Weaker Passage): Point out weaknesses, unsupported generalizations, or emotional appeals in the opposing text.
- Paragraph 4 (Conclusion): Restate your thesis in new words and summarize why strong empirical evidence outweighs subjective claims.